https://persiflage-1.dreamwidth.org/ persiflage_1 - Dreamwidth Studios Wed, 24 May 2023 09:06:22 GMT LiveJournal / Dreamwidth Studios persiflage_1 personal https://v2.dreamwidth.org/17447074/616395 https://persiflage-1.dreamwidth.org/ 100 100 https://persiflage-1.dreamwidth.org/615.html Wed, 24 May 2023 09:06:22 GMT https://persiflage-1.dreamwidth.org/615.html Blimey! <br /><br />This is only my second post on here in the years since I started my DW journal and I'm here requesting assistance.<br /><br />Specifically, I'm looking for a beta-reader for some original fiction set in a fantasy secondary world. The first two fics, kindly beta-read by&nbsp;<span style='white-space: nowrap;'><a href='https://thisbluespirit.dreamwidth.org/profile'><img src='https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png' alt='[personal profile] ' width='17' height='17' style='vertical-align: text-bottom; border: 0; padding-right: 1px;' /></a><a href='https://thisbluespirit.dreamwidth.org/'><b>thisbluespirit</b></a></span>, are here: https://archiveofourown.org/series/3522826<br /><br />I'm just looking for general concrit of the sort that says &quot;You could phrase this like this as it'll sound better&quot; or &quot;too many repetitions of X&quot;. Not SPaG as I'm fine with that - although the odd typo will slip through, of course, since I'm only human! - but I generally try to catch those before I send to a beta.<br /><br />I'm looking to start posting&nbsp;<span style='white-space: nowrap;'><a href='https://rainbowfic.dreamwidth.org/profile'><img src='https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/community.png' alt='[community profile] ' width='16' height='16' style='vertical-align: text-bottom; border: 0; padding-right: 1px;' /></a><a href='https://rainbowfic.dreamwidth.org/'><b>rainbowfic</b></a></span>&nbsp;once I'm more certain my Bitch Muse is willing to continue playing in this sandbox.<br /><br /><br type="_moz" /><br /><br /><img src="https://www.dreamwidth.org/tools/commentcount?user=persiflage_1&ditemid=615" width="30" height="12" alt="comment count unavailable" style="vertical-align: middle;"/> comments https://persiflage-1.dreamwidth.org/615.html original fiction beta-reading The Piano Guys creative public 0